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Hogwarts, Hogwarts,
Hoggy Warty Hogwarts,
Teach us something please,
Whether we be old and bald,
Or young with scabby knees,
Our heads could do with filling,
With some interesting stuff,
For now they're bare
And full of air,
Dead flies and bits of fluff.
So teach us stuff worth knowing,
Bring back what we forgot,
Just do your best
We'll do the rest,
And learn until our brains all rot!



1: The heavens declare the glory of God; and the firmament sheweth his handywork.
2: Day unto day uttereth speech, and night unto night sheweth knowledge.
3: There is no speech nor language, where their voice is not heard.
4: Their line is gone out through all the earth, and their words to the end of the world. In them hath he set a tabernacle for the sun,
5: Which is as a bridegroom coming out of his chamber, and rejoiceth as a strong man to run a race.
6: His going forth is from the end of the heaven, and his circuit unto the ends of it: and there is nothing hid from the heat thereof.
7: The law of the LORD is perfect, converting the soul: the testimony of the LORD is sure, making wise the simple.
8: The statutes of the LORD are right, rejoicing the heart: the commandment of the LORD is pure, enlightening the eyes.
9: The fear of the LORD is clean, enduring for ever: the judgments of the LORD are true and righteous altogether.
10: More to be desired are they than gold, yea, than much fine gold: sweeter also than honey and the honeycomb.
11: Moreover by them is thy servant warned: and in keeping of them there is great reward.
12: Who can understand his errors? cleanse thou me from secret faults.
13: Keep back thy servant also from presumptuous sins; let them not have dominion over me: then shall I be upright, and I shall be innocent from the great transgression.
14: Let the words of my mouth, and the meditation of my heart, be acceptable in thy sight, O LORD, my strength, and my redeemer.

Monday, July 30, 2007

Snape's Most Guarded Memory and Luck

So, I am "back in the saddle" for a bit here. Some hectic things in life here in the Bronx have made it difficult to get time to write - including pulling of a move. But also, when I can and can't write her at the security desk varies ... they have instituted a new position of a second person on night tour at the dispatch desk, but only 4 nights a week. When she is here, and thus 2 of us at the desk, I can't really write ... but her schedule is at variance with mine: I work the same 4 nights every week and she works 4 on-4 off. So this week the timing runs around to that my 4 nights on are exactly her 4 nights off so I will be sitting the desk by myself all 4 nights, so maybe I will get caught up on some of the things I want to say on Deathly Hallows (including some comments on other comments on the last few posts, so check back there and there is probably some follow up).


This first one is pretty simple and doesn't even really require much text support (although I throw some things in to help out :) ) - the general plot revelations are prominent enough to stand on their own. It is that I think that the "Snape's worst Memory" chapter in OotP is intentionally misleading. I think Snape "front-loaded" the penseive with that memory to protect the ones he REALLY does not want Harry to see ... which are the ones we see in Deathly Hallows. It seems highly improbable that Snape would not put those later-revealed memories in the penseive, and I think that no matter what, Snape would be mad if Harry dived into his thoughts in the penseive ... and genuinely mad ... and genuinely does not want him to do so and genuinely tries to prevent it from happening. But I think that just on the odd chance that something comes up and Harry does go diving, especially as Snape has such a dim view of Harry's inheriting his father's arrogance, Snape protected the valuable memories with another that is "special" in a way I'll describe momentarily.


In short, while I think Snape genuinely does not want Harry to go snooping and is genuinely angry, I don't think everything was exactly as it appeared. In a way he simultaneously protects the memories we find in DH, probably making sure that memory of the OWLs is a long one (and more on that in a mo') to give as much time as possible for Snape to return in the unfortunate event that Harry, well, that he does what he does, but he also sort of sets Harry up to "reap the rewards" of his arrogance if he does what he does. That memory is, I think, in Snape's mind, potentially a way of showing Harry "you think your father was so great? Here have a look at what he was really like, Potter!"

Think about it ... was the section of the memory when they are actually in the test really something to be gaurded? And there is a pretty nice possible "cut-marker" there, when they leave the OWL and are outside for a time before to have shortened up the memory and made it less bulky for extraction if he had wanted. And the section before the actual attack on Snape? One question might be how those conversations between the marauder's was in Snape's memory if he was so intent on his test question (of course a possible answer is simply that this is, after all, magical revelation, and goes beyond the "normal scope of intentionality" - but I also think the answer I propose here is equally possible). I think teenage Snape was not as intent on his parchment as he seemed - that he was avidly listening to what he could over-hear of that conversation with loathing for the four-some, as well as glancing sidelong with loathing at Sirius' casual manner on the test (that same kicking back the chair on the back legs as he does in 3 12 Grimmauld Place when they are at each other as adults) ... and that, in addition to lengthening out the memory to give him more time to get back on the scene in the event the opportunity arises and Harry goes delving where he has no right, it also provides a chance to say "here, Potter, let me give you a REALLY full dose of whatyour father and his buddies were REALLY like! Just like you snooping around in my thoughts in the penseive."

In short, Snape is a pretty crafty fellow and I think he sort of "booby-trapped" the pensieve in the event that Harry has opportunity to snoop and takes it (I'm not saying I think Harry is a snooping gossip etc, but you have to admit that that is the way Snape would see it given his history with James and Sirius and Harry's likeness to the former and affinity for the latter), in addition to giving himself some more time, in that event, to protect the really vital stuff.


I'm not saying Snape had a good reason for ditching Harry 's lessons (and the following behavior in potions class is obviously a case of giving into vindictive attitude) ... but I also do think there is more at stake here than simply what we get the impression of when Dumbledore says "my word, Severus, that I shall never reveal the best of you?" (DH 679). If Harry had seen those memories he sees in DH, but back in book 5 before Voldy has become afraid of the connection, a lot could have been jeapordized ... both the mission AND Severus' life. He has put himself VERY much in harm's way and if Voldy gets access to those memories by them entering Harry's memory in the penseive ... well that is a fine thank you for risking so much to protect Harry (even given that fact that there is some variance in that motivation - that Snape's motivation is more to protect "Lily Potter's son" than to protect "Harry Potter" ... but as we see with Narcissa Malfoy, the desire to protect child is, even when "lopsided," by nature an intrinsically good desire and thus more open to working in concert with the "greater good" [when Narcissa helps Harry fake being dead, and thus undo Voldy, even though her question reveals that she is primarily interested in in Draco's well being ... that whole fingernails in the chest thing, RIGHT over the heart, is a VERY interesting characterization moment on Narcissa, which is one of the reason's I love Rowling's work so much - the way she draws her characters, here the converse to the slightest haughty disdain we see in the third sister's face when Harry mistakes her for Bellatrix at first glance early on]).

But here is one final consideration ... as I discussed in another post, Occlumency never winds up working - at least as it is supposed to do (as Draco is able to do it in HBP) - and winds up, in the end, not being the answer. Harry himself learns his own path of shutting out those visions when he need sto concentrate, when he needs to be in the moment of his here and now ("Harry's scar burned in the silence, but he made a supreme effort to keep himself present, not to slip into Voldemort's mind." [DH 452]; "He was gliding around the high walls of the black fortress - No, he was Harry, tied up and wandless, in grave danger." [DH 453]) while at other times utilizing them. But even before this he winds up not only with the link operating full force, but fully possessed by Voldy, at the end of OotP ... and his love is powerful enough that voldy cannot bear it. And here in DH many many times the connection and the visions help them to progress in an informed way rather than quite so blindly. So, if snape had succeeded in teaching Harry proper occlumency, things might have been much different. We cannot, of course say that this was intentional wisdom on snape's part, but it was ... lucky.

I once heard Jospeh Pearce speak on Tolkien and he addressed the question of why, if Tolkien was such a profound Christian writer, was there no "God" in Lord of the Rings. Pearce answered that while there is no "God" character in the LOTR (although we know there is in the Silmarillion), there IS a distinctly strong sense of providence. Now, I do not pretend that this element is present in Rowling's work in anywhere near as concrete a way as in Tolkien's. But I do think that there is some sense of a transcendant benevolence in the world, if one is willing to cooperate with it.

In a lot of other works I would tend to say that luck is just luck, maybe even in some cases evidence of chaos theory - but not here in Rowling's work. Quite simply put she has spent too much time developing the theme ... most notedly in the "Felix Felicis" material in HBP. But even here, in DH, you can get a sense of the general tendency towards benevolence that luck has (towards what is truly good for a person, beyond just what a person wants, although when a person has a strong will for evil and uses something like felix felicis I think they can bend luck to their service, but it is more like an enslavement of luck rather than it's true nature) in how much voldy detests it: "I have been careless, and so have been thwarted by luck and chance, those wreckers of all but the best laid plans" (DH 7).

In a way, at the very least, the "happy side of chaos theory" is that luck and chance are the great levelers of the uneven odds that people like Voldy build up for themselves. In a way they are, in a work like the Potter series, the objective world's mirror of free will in the subjective world of acting persons ... the refusal to be enslaved (and in the Christian world-view, God is not interested in slaves but in children ... of course the inter-play between free will and the fact that we need Grace to choose the good remains, as it it ever has been in our world, a mystery).

I think that the fact that Snape's actions have a "lucky" outcome is a point in his favor, even if he has been quite the heel and much less than charitable at certain points.

Structure

Just a final note on structure in the series, in light of all the time I have spent on this site developing the concepts of ancient literature stucturing devices such as chiasm. It seems an apt place to do so here because I am tying together book 5 and book 7 material. there are a lot of common elements between the two books that maybe at some point I will try to catalog 9or as they say in fancy academic terms "compose a taxonomy of"). For here I just want to propose that while I still fully subscribe to chiasm as the primary meta-structure of the series (although, who knows, rowling may well heartily disagree with me on its primacy :) ), I think this is one of those structures that operates alongside/within it (like the books 3 and 7 connection of the shrieking shack, which I will here freely admit Red Hen nailed really nicely, and my Peevesish hat is off to RH in true admiration ... although it was more the pente-ulitimate and I must admit that I was quite happy that my theory of the GOF "graveyard lift" being repeated fit so nicely the death in the woods and then the elevation to a battle on a new plane or plateau, in the castle/great hall, with, interstingly, Narcissa's love of Draco acting a little bit like the phoenix song does in the GOF graveyard scene, not so much causing it, I guess, but definitely enabling it ... and then you have the nice use of our Rebudo character, Hagrid, as the "Paul Bearer" of sorts for the "taking it to the next level").

I do not think books 5 and 7 are the outer limits of a distinct chiasm, but I do think that with book 6 as a center point they form a distinctly discrete inclusio/ring-structure of the final 3 books, in the 4 book -3 book structure that I have described elswhere operating alongside the 7 element chiasm (4 cardinal virtues, 3 theological virtues etc and other numerological siginificances in 7 as the most magically powerful number).

so there you have it ... some more of my rambling thoughs on DH in hopefully not too awefully rambling style.

Merlin the Meandering
posted by Merlin at 1:52 AM


Comments on "Snape's Most Guarded Memory and Luck"

 

Blogger Pauli said ... (July 30, 2007 3:39 PM) : 

Snape's worst memory did contain a significant event which made it, if not the worst, then close. Snape calling Lily a "mudblood", firstly made him out to be as big a jerk as the marauders and secondly it spelled the end of any chance of a relationship. The first aspect would be enough to make Snape want ot keep it from Harry and the second would be enough to make him not want to remember it himself. My 2 cents.

 

Blogger Merlin said ... (July 31, 2007 1:21 AM) : 

That's true, and I was going to come back in on a comment and add that the memory also did show something that, from a death eater perspective, is "damaging" - the fact that he was "beat" by Potter and his "gang." In short, I think the larger part of Snape would rather no body see it, for the mudbllod comment and for the "getting bested" by an arrogant Gryffindor toerag who was quicker on the draw. But I also think that there is a part of Snape that follows a model of "self as weapon," which falls under a model of "person as weapon" (and sometimes, or rather all the time, "weapon" as we think of it does not cover the whole of the reality ... this is a flipside to the AK as psychic invasion, because that is fully and solely "self as weapon" - but here I think it is usually "weapon as excuse ... simply to be heard" - meaning an excuse from the self, pain wants to be heard for healing but in the same breath it has the tendency to turn into rage, to hate, so the subconscious strikes a deal with the conscious, it wraps "plea" in the rubric of "weapon" and conscious takes the deal it can also really and concretely work as weapon ... well, actually I think a lot of this takes place mostly on the subconscious level, but same breakdown of "players" ... but in basic form I think that this is what Lewis is talking about in the Great Divorce when the angel/heaven-soul tells the shade that it is some of those who come up from the grey town the most enraged at God, that walk the farthest in to Heaven, pushing themselves through all the pain of the violent substantiality of heaven to get as close as they can sto spit as directly in God's face as they can, thee are often the most sure to convert because they have the strongest drive for some concrete resolution [thus the pain of it becomes the pain of Purgatory, of course this doesn't match up exactly wtih the Catholic doctrine of purgatory, since purgatory is the place where all "activity" is done by God, the person does not participate volitionally in the purgation, the willl is indeed affected but in this stage it distinctly does not involve any initiation on the part of the will, as I understand the doctrine, but then I think that even if Lewis is consciously trying have an image of purgatory, what he is really doing, subconsciously or whatever, and doing well, is describing the interworking of psychology and spirituality in this life) ... this part of Snape, I think, says "if that does happen, then let the pain happen if it breaks up Potter's grandiose little picture of his father and Sirius" (especially after that interchange in the kitchen at #12) ...

In fact, I would have to say that Snape, as a Legilimens, has, at least on the illative level, and maybe preceisely only on the illative level, a decent grasp of what we call psychology and an ability to read not only minds but faces. I think he can tell when Potter comes back out of the pensieve that Potter is not looking at him with some little snotty, bratty "yeah, my dad kicked your but for being a bigot you little slytherin snot-rag" kind of look - he can at least guess that Harry is affected the way he is, and that when Harry tries to speak he is not going to taunt but to apologize, but there is a prt of him that wants Harry to be the bigoted brat, wants to be righteously angry with him for that, and if he is not moving in that direction will be unrighteously angry with him for moving towards virtue. There is a part that knows that Harry may be seeking some resolution, that there is a part of Harry that really does care about Snape's pain and would want to reach some sort of resolution, and to cut that opportunity off from it is power, is maybe some form of revenge on James ... using one's own pain as a weapon that way, holding it out there almost as if to say "there it is, the pain, and you are part of the guilty group and, no, you will not be able simply to 'make it all right' - all I want is for you to bleed in return and to be able to watch it, that stupid suffering look on your face of wanting to say something to make ammends and not being able to ... " (actually two things popped into my head when putting it that way, 1 is the way snape shoves the scar-dark-mark in Fudges face at at the end of book 4, the other is the statement of the dwarf/left arm in the last episode of the TV series "Twin Peaks" from the 1980s by David Lynch [Lynch is a little bit twisted of a dude, so just be warned if you ever think to check out that series and watch it ... and definitely don't do all 30 episodes in 3 days as I did] ... "I want my garmonbozia [pain and suffering]" - in that scene it is the statement of a satanic element demanding it's blood sacrifice, but many times in lief, I think, what this piggy-back's on is the same statement by wounded human beings, wanting vengeance because it feels like vengeance will fill up the whole inside of the slef that the original pain tore open, even though one usually knows, if one really thinks about it, that it will not") ...

... this is one of the things in the little trade ooff of "plea" and "weapon" that makes it work as a weapon.

I am not saying these are the largest "parts" of Snape (in truth I would not say they are "parts" ... they are the same "parts" as violently good things in him, but all such powers in the human person get pulled both ways, get strecthed thin to the point of breaking sometimes, "like butter spread over too much bread") ... and definitely not the only "parts" ... I'm just saying I think they are in the mix as something more than Snape being ticked off that Harry saw the memory that he in no way wanted him to see, that there was not some part of him that secretly hoped he might, or at least said "if, through your arrogance of snooping, my life is going to be put at greater risk by you seeing the material between myself and Dumbledore at a time when the dark Lord has exceptional acces to your mind and knows it, I might as well get a little vengeance out of the deal

Like I said, "Good Snape" I can buy, and obviously have to now since that was what was in book 7, but "nice Snape," in the PR sense in which things tend to go, or get "spun," in our culture, that I can't buy ... (and indeed, this is what we get with Dumbledore in book 7 ... the "goodness" is undamaged, but it does become more mysterious precisely because it operates in and alongside very real human foibles)

But then add this all on top of a possible danger of Harry filling his mind with information (the memories we get in DH) that might seriously jeapordize everything if Voldy were to get ahold of it through Harry;s mind ... and you have a whole grocery list of reasons to be really irrate with Harry if you are Snape. Wither way, I think he had to "front-load" the pensieve with something as an absolute back up measure ... the most damaging thing in the world woould be Harry seeing the DH memories at thta tpoint in book 5. Of the notion that snape did so "front-load" the pensieve as a protective measure, of that I am firmly convinced (well, this is always, um, interesting stuff ... Snape doesn't really "exist" now does he, and he only ever "did" what was on the page, and the author could come out with the pen and directly cut off the possibility that he even "could have" done that by saying that that was not what they had the character doing, right? but I do think the character and the story has an existence larger the author's own conscious intention and that that story has a logic, and in this case I really do think that this is what the logic of that story point concretely to) ... what I am doing here is a stab at the motivation for this particular memory as "up first," and my reading of it interprets the "front-loaded safety feature" as doing double duty as a "booby-trap" - via the motivation I am proposing for using that particular memory as a "buffer" - as opposed to, say, a segmented compilation memory of every dump Snape ever took in his life.

I also think, although I am very tentative about how concretely this can be drawn out without thinking about it a lot more ... that this may be the reason why, in the logic of the story, that Harry HAD to survive ... because that is the promis Snape made, and Harry, alive, is the concrete reconciliation of snape and Lily ... but like I said that is VERY tentative, especially formulated that way.

Here is another thing ... Snape ruled Hogwarts legitimately, as opposed to Umbridge, against whom the office locked itself ... Snape should have a portrait, right? ... I would love to read some memoirs of Harry going and talking to that portrait and getting some more backstory on Snape.

 

Blogger Merlin said ... (July 31, 2007 4:15 AM) : 

I further support I offer DH 679 -
Snape: "This must be between us! Swear it! I cannot bear ... especially Potter's son ... I want your word!"

I would note the mention of Potter's son ... not Lily's son - so in addition to wnating to protect those memories we saw in DH (and I cannot see him leaving them so readily accessible in his head [and I think I have talked abou that before - thinking they would still be there but at a much deeper core level not so readily accessible if the major presence has been removed and put into the penseive] given that he suspects that the connection could be even accidentally reversed, which is why he is storing thoughts in the penseive in the first place) - in addition to stashing them away for saftey reasons, not want Potter to see them and thus Voldy have access through legilemency) he cannot stand Potter knowing he is help for personal reasoins ... and what I am arguing for here is that the method he uses is thr front-loading with another memory and that there is an element of personal grudge - just going to show exactly how desparately snape did not want Harry, Potter's son to know of his love of his mother and his help in protecting him, that he was willing to use the levicorpus memory as a protection of it, and I still maintin a little bit of some tendency in snape of hoing it caused Harry pain to see what a toe-rag James could be

 

Blogger Pauli said ... (July 31, 2007 10:47 AM) : 

Yeah, see your point. It does seem like the "swirling memories" in the pensieve have a tempting quality about them, piquing the curiosity a great deal. That in turn would help explain why Tom Riddle gave his diary the pensieve-like properties to lure people into it.

 

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